Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis.


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From: [identity profile] 6beforelunch.livejournal.com


Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis

1. He translates the section of the database that they've been putting off for months as "relating to non-vital systems". Admittedly, knowing the guidelines of the day-care center doesn't help them much, but finding out about the sauna is pretty sweet.

2. He brings a king-sized package of M&Ms with him which he trades to Sheppard for a personalized tour of the city. The tour Elizabeth arranged was fine, but it was for the whole team. Sam and McKay kept arguing and he had to keep Vala from stealing things every ten minutes. When he goes with Sheppard, he can take his time. Plus Sheppard knows where all the really cool stuff is.

Sheppard trades the M&Ms to Doctor Green for an old Soap Opera Digest, then turns around and trades the magazine to Captain Reynolds for Sports Illustrated.

Captain Reynolds trades the Soap Opera Digest to Doctor Kim for some silly putty. Reynolds uses the silly putty to make an impression of some interesting ruins on M35-1326 which helps Doctor Hartman create a key to gain access to a hidden chamber. The chamber hints at the presence of a ZPM which has McKay off world for three days.

They never do find the ZPM, but Zelenka is in the middle of an important project and being Rodney-free for three days means he gets it done in record time.

3. He accidentally spills his water bottle on Captain Gambini's laptop. When Doctor Nguyen stays late in her lab to fix it, she notices the fluctuations in the power being fed to the shield in time to wake McKay before a power surge rips through the shied generator and destroys their best defense.

Gambini doesn't know about the shield. He's just pissed that his hard drive has to be replaced and he's lost all of the episodes of Grey's Anatomy that he had stored.

4. He stays up late with Ronon, Sheppard, McKay and Sam trading war stories. When the topic turns to torture across the galaxies, McKay makes it half way through a compare and contrast of Goa'uld and Wraith methods before saying that he has better things to do than play "ways I've suffered" and storming off. McKay doesn't mention the conversation again, but Sheppard notices that he complains a lot less about the conditions on their next few missions.

5. He encourages Doctor Polk to stay with the program. Three months later, Polk walks into the line of fire, takes a Genii bullet for Doctor McKay, and goes home in a box. It's the best thing for Atlantis, but if Polk's parents knew about the conversation, they'd wish Daniel had just kept his big mouth shut.

From: [identity profile] niamaea.livejournal.com


These are all so great that I can't pick a favorite. I love the sauna and the way #2 unfolds, and McKay in both #3 and #4.

And I love #5 because it's true, and it is the best thing for Atlantis, but that doesn't make it less painful, and it's just really nicely done.

From: [identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com

Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis (SPOILERS FOR SGA's S3 "VENGENANCE")


Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis (SPOILERS FOR SGA's S3 "VENGENANCE")

1) He helps with, of course, the translation of the database. When he finds two years worth of logs about an Ancient lab on MR2-330 chronicling the introduction of the iratus bug in the Pegasus Galaxy, the anthropologists and xenobiologists throw a party in his honor. They have more answers than they knew what to do with.

2) As an expert on Ascension, Daniel was more qualified to teach Ascension 101 to those interested, and it was a good thing, too, when it came to the case of Atlantis’ military commander. Daniel was in Elizabeth’s office at the time, going over a codex from the planet Vulci with her, when a commotion drew them from her office, only to find John Sheppard, lying in the middle of the gateroom, naked as the day he was born.

3) He helps Elizabeth smooth the relations between the expedition and the Genii. In the beginning, the treaty was touch-and-go and was almost dissolved more times than Daniel could count, but after fourteen months, Atlantis had the best espionage network at their disposal.

4) Nobody mends broken fences quite like Daniel. By the time Daniel has a chance to chat with Michael, they no longer have to worry about the superwraith coming to eat them.

5) The loneliness that comes with assuming and shouldering such leadership and responsibility of the Atlantis expedition is tough, but Elizabeth shoulders the sometimes-crushing weight, much like Atlas would, and without complaint. But the late nights she spends in her office with Daniel, discussing the history and origins of the Alterans and astria porta, begins to peel the layers of isolation that Elizabeth had felt since she stepped foot in the city. The morning Elizabeth wakes up to Daniel’s fingers teasing her clit and whispering Bright star, would I steady fast as thou art, not in lone splendor hung aloft the night into her neck only strengthens her resolve when later that day she has to send Colonel Sheppard on a mission that ended up saving the city, but ending his life.

From: [identity profile] whimsicalwhims.livejournal.com

Re: Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis


I like these. Daniel really would be very helpful to have around in Atlantis, wouldn't he?

From: [identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com

Re: Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis (SPOILERS FOR SGA's S3 "VENGENANCE")



and I love what he whispered to her, that's so lovely

I may be tranposing, but I'd like to think Daniel's versed enough in literature to be able to recite John Keats. *laughs*

I'm glad you liked it! I'm a big fan of Daniel/Elizabeth (especially blonde!Weir) and boy, I think they gots the goods for like, a romantic relationship, I mean apart from the fact that Jack and Daniel are Forever.

^_^ *hugs komos*
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From: [personal profile] dhae_knight_1

Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis


He teaches Rodney to shoot straight - even on the target-range.
"It's threatening someone you care about," he says, real quietly into Rodney's ear, because years ago, that's what Jack said into his.
And Rodney gets to be a damn good shot.

The first time Zelenka mutters out loud in czech, Daniel cocks his head to one side and listens. The second time he frowns. The third time... the third time he gets up, crosses over to Radek who's fighting a recalcitrant computer and says something to him so quietly nobody else hears it.
After that, Zelenka always starts to mutter in czech - but ends up smiling.

Daniel is an explorer at heart - and he's also a very smart man. So when he starts to wonder about something, he picks up a P90 from the armory (just to be on the safe side, because Jack's endless arguments *did* make sense), and goes looking for an answer.
The third time he goes exploring, he finds the answer to something that's been bothering him for a while. Now all Atlantis needs is a hundred extra pilots or so.

About a month after Daniel came to Atlantis, he overhears a couple of thickheaded marines yammer about how good it is that there are no filthy faggots in Atlantis, and how the flyboys back at the SGC *finally* got something right.
That's the beginning of Daniel's third crusade.
He talks to Elizabeth - at length - until she finally caves and agrees to take a resolution of Atlantis law back to the IOC. He talks to the scientists on Atlatis, until Rodney, out of the blue, grabs his head, drags him halfway across the table and kisses him among half-eaten alien foods just to shut him up.
In the end, he talks to Sheppard - who's listening - and to all of the marines - who, for the most, aren't - until they surrender, just to get the hell out of the room.
And the next message from the SGC includes a unanimous ban on discriminating homosexuals in Atlantis; military or civilian - from the IOC.

On december 22nd, some five months since Daniel finally made it to Atlantis, the Daedalus arrives with a surprise on-board. Elizabeth is the first to find out, because her office is the first stop. Sheppard is second, because... well, because it's going to change his life on Atlantis. Daniel... Daniel is third, and he finds out because he's crossing the gateroom at just the right time, and looks up at just the right angle - and then he's running up the stairs, through the control-room and bursting into Elizabeths office, just slightly out of breath.
"Jack!"
An amused eyebrow lifts, then... "Daniel?"
"What are you *doing* here?"
"I got bored with Washington," Jack says, but the twist of his lips and the gleam in his eyes is telling a different story.

From: [identity profile] niamaea.livejournal.com

Re: Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis


Nice response! I especially loved #3 and #5, especially the way it pans out. And #2 because - Radek!
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From: [personal profile] dhae_knight_1

Re: Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis


Thank you. I've always found it a little strange that they've only got those few puddle-jumpers to defend Atlantis with. And I'm sure it'll help when Jack finally *does* retire - to a little cabin on the main-land near a lake where he can fish - because he doesn't want to be cut off, so he gets his own jumper.

From: [identity profile] randomfreshink.livejournal.com

Five ways Daniel improves Atlantis..with some help....


1) He knows Vala likes small shiny things, things that fit in a fist or a pocket or in his pocket--and he's not going to ask how it happens he's always pulling stuff out of there. But when he catches her trying to hot wire a jumper, he's too shocked to do more than stare at her as she starts an explanation about borrowing, and being one big sort of family, and how...well, she starts complaining about her boots. He just shakes his head, grabs her by the belt, drags her away before anyone else can catch her. And he can't find the heart to do more than frown because he's got to admit she has a point about now nice it'd be if SG-1 had transport that fit through a Stargate. He's not saying anything, either, after he hears one of the jumpers now seems to fly faster.

2) It's another accident he's not going to admit. Because it came out of a fight with Vala--yes, another one. An argument that went from the two of them glaring at each other to Vala taking a swipe at him. And he probably shouldn't have grabbed whatever the hell she'd managed to fish out of the water. It might have been kelp, but it was black and tried to wrap around her neck in ways that did not look safe and had her choking. So never mind that he saved her life, she was still pissed at him--apparently the black market for exotic things is more than lucrative. He tossed the thing down a recycling chute, but that was before he'd read up on the city and learned nothing's ever wasted. When bits of black showed up in the food that night--and kept showing up--he and Vala swapped stares, pushed their plates away, switched to MREs. Everyone else loves the new 'pepper' seasoning. Thank god, Vala just keeps giving them that big smile.

3) Sam's the one who started it. She complained about the food selection in the cafeteria, but he's pretty sure it wasn't with the intent to do anything more than just bitch. She's working as hard as he is to come up with reasons why staying in Atlantis isn't something they want. But Vala was the one who went to Radek, charmed him into telling her about things she should not be allowed to know. Or touch. It's his fault, however, that every beverage started coming out with a faint coffee flavor. He shouldn't have sat up with Vala, talking about favorite things they'd found on Earth. But, really, coffee beats the hell out of black bits of god knows what.

4) He didn't discover it exactly--well, sort of. But Vala's telling everyone he did. In fact, what he did was lose his temper. Vala had broken his damn digital recorder, the one he really liked, the one Sam had bought him the year after...well, it was a welcome home present. But Vala stepped on it. He gathered up the remains, and he was so damn angry, so he turned and pitched them hard. And he wasn't aiming at her, but she moved, ducked--right into the line of fire. The metal bounced off her head, hit the wall. She went down, he went straight for her side--and then they were both staring at the hidden library. Now Vala's telling everyone he found it because she knows it makes him feel guilty as hell--meaning, he's caving way, way too much on just about anything she asks for or wants.

5) On the last day, he's the one who grabs hold of the back of Vala's jacket before she can give everyone one of her big, friendly hugs. He's already put back something from Dr. Becket's lab (once, and don't ask him what it was). The hug lets Ronan keeps any number of knives that have otherwise been liberated and discreetly returned--along with Teyla's fighting sticks yesterday (twice for them). Stopping the hug means Dr. McKay's communications headset will not go missing (Daniel lost count on that one). And no hugs for Sheppard means no more sidearms missing. However, Daniel's letting Vala keep the guns. Because she's right--a person needs protection in any part of any galaxy.
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